【黃金24小時】面試後不是只能被動等通知！一封感謝函增加錄取機會

Part 1a: Thank-you Letter常用句—文章開首（表達對面試的感謝）

 

1. Many thanks for taking the time to meet me yesterday.

感謝您昨天抽空與我見面。

 

2. Thank you for the interview and tour of your company yesterday.

感謝您昨天的面談及　貴公司安排的參觀。

 

3. I would like to thank you for taking the time to show me around and answering my questions.

感謝您抽空帶我參觀　貴公司並解答我的疑惑。

 

4. It was a pleasure meeting with you to discuss career opportunities at Prince Products.

今天能夠與您談到關於Prince食品的工作機會，我深感榮幸。

 

5. Thank you for meeting with me this morning to discuss the vacancy for an administrative assistant.

感謝您今天早上能夠針對行政助理一職與我討論。

 

6. I enjoyed meeting you and learning more about Prince Corporation.

我非常高興能夠獲得面試機會，以及能對Prince公司有進一步的認識。

 

 

Part 1b: Thank-you Letter常用句—文章中段（闡述面試內容及工作熱忱）

 

1. I am impressed by your customer policy.

我對　貴公司的顧客服務政策印象很深刻。

 

2. I am impressed with Prince Corporation's strong marketing plans and strategies for achieving its objectives.

對於Prince公司為達目標所擬定的行銷計畫及策略，我深感敬佩。

 

3. I believe that my academic training at the ABC University and my experience working in the International Trade Headquarters at L&Y Corporation qualify me for the position.

我深信自己在ABC大學所受的教育，以及在L&Y公司國際貿易總部的工作經驗，能使我勝任這份工作。

 

4. I am sure that with my experience, I will be able to contribute to your company.

我相信自己的工作經驗能夠對　貴公司有所貢獻。

 

Part 1b: Thank-you Letter常用句—文章最後（期待對方聯絡）

 

1. I look forward to hearing from you.

恭候您的回音。

 

2. I would like to meet with you again to further discuss this position.

希望能再次會面，以針對這份工作進行更深入的討論。

 

3. I will be happy to provide any other information you may need to assist your decision process.

我非常樂意提供您在做決定時所需要的其他任何資料。

 

4. Should you need any further information, please feel free to contact me on 9123-9123.

若您需要進一步的資料，請隨時撥打9123-9123。

 

Part 2: Thank-you Letter範例

 

 

Dear Mr. Chan,

 

Thank you for taking the time to interview me yesterday for the position as a Mathematics tutor. I enjoyed learning more about the opportunity and your school.

 

The position looks challenging and I am very eager to join your teaching team. I believe that my teaching strategies and classroom leadership make me well-qualified for this position.

 

Should you require any additional information, please feel free to contact me by email or telephone. I look forward to hearing from you.

 

Yours sincerely

Carol Li

 

　　＊最後謹記，寫感謝函的時候，要非常小心，切忌有「過度逢迎討好」的感覺。這封信的重點是「表達感謝＋強調你適合這份工作」，而不是「擦靚對方對鞋」。